Lady Pirate

Mysterious Flower Rona 2289 Under the rein of King Charlie Zabel Preface “We have no hope.” Dusk said, crossing her arms over her chest. “They outnumber us, we should just ...

The Rhythm is very nice. I disagree though, I think it works well as one long stanza, I think it better helps the flow.

The emotion is there, you just have to work a little to pull it out more, and bring it to the surface.

The pain is almost tangible in this poem, it sticks to the back of your throat, leaving a raw feeling there. The emotion is real...I like it, a lot.

I like it, it has an edge of mystic about it, that I like.

It was a little confusing at first, I had to read it a few times to really grasp the meaning, you might want to work on clearing it up, because ...

I'm in the heart of the Bible Belt, and I most write Fantasy. Of course, as soon as you tell some one that they run far, far away, as quickly ...

Let me tell you, I know all about the 6th grade teacher. English, if I never see anther piece of grammar again, it will be WAY too soon.

It's been a while since I submitted anything in a MZ, but most MZ have websites now. I would recommend going to the website, and making sure that: A. the ...

I am normally a very indecisive person, now I have a way to make decisions, now all I have to do is find a way to carry vinegar around with ...

Very Anne McCaffrey... I LOVE Anne McCaffrey. I like the picture it gives you in the mind's eye. If you ever add on to it, PM me, so I can ...

Despite the fact that is somehow was cut twenty lines short, I liked it. Oh,and don't worry about your age, if you wanted to be an old, and wrinkled, prune, ...

So I've been around for a while, reading the post, and enjoying it, because I can't find works by people my age in the lib. which stinks, of course, but ...

Night Whisperings The night was still~ quiet. “To quiet if you ask me.” The girl muttered to herself as she walked the lonely night. And indeed she was right it ...

This is really good, I felt like I was right there with you.